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[You Roast My Beef]

Dat Ass

Aww man~

Lovely work thar mr Molk sir~

molkman responds:

Thanks man! :)

[NiN10Doh: ToThe64thPower]

50/50

I tried to enjoy this, i really did...

Don't take this personally Kirb, i just had to voice my opinion.

The animation is very fluid, well paced and polished. You truly managed to grab yourself some major artistic talent for this.

HOWEVER

The thing that lets this whole thing down is the writing. No offence to you guys but this was very awkward and hard to sit through.

The jokes were terrible, felt forced and were very predictable. Yelling and slapping some one at the same time is very family guy-esque and doesn't work. The 'done to death ' memes, the douche-bag narrator cliche, the awkward arguments, the random yelling, the herp a derp voices, the creepy persona moon... i could go on.

Animation isn't just about animation, it needs a good story/writing to be complete. You can band together some of the greatest artistic talent there is and create something absolutely stunning, but without a good story/writing it'll just fall apart. It'll be pretty, but have no soul.

Look at this. Do you wanna try and up your game and make an animation that captivates its audience, connects to them emotionally and makes it truly memorable amongst the others? Or do you wanna continue doing rinse and repeat joke game parody flashes that have the writing and creative genius of a toilet cistern?

You have so much potential, please don't let it go to waste.

[Howto make great comments]

Yes

I want an apple hand.

LazyMuffin responds:

Some people may mistake it for a penis, it's a blessing and a curse.

[Oh, Mr. Woofykins]

Quite~

...he is quite the silly goose~

RWappin responds:

Just like you are! haHAHAHA!

[Leo & Satan III]

Best of the 3

Your frame by frame skills are getting top notch, glad to see you're venturing into other methods of animation aside from tweens.

My personal fav of the 3 you've made.

[No More Tricks]

Short but sweet

I don't see why he has to be upset, he gets to be happy for the rest of his life~

jaxxy responds:

...or does he?

[Awesome Reach]

LOUD NOISES

Animation was to be expected, beautiful and fluid. You've definatly stepped up over the years.

As for the humour... it didn't do it for me. In the end it just boiled down to random loud noises and a 'tehe' dick joke with the controllers. I missed the way your older 'awesome' videos played out where they actually involved the game and clever humour such as Awesome crossing and Awesome gaiden.

[LARRY episode 2]

Bout time this showed up.

Been waiting for this fer a while now and i'm glad it didn't dissapoint.

It's finally good to see a decent flash which doesn't rely on randomness, sex, drugs, using flavour of the month material or loud screaming and swearing to be funny.

My only complaint is the tween abuse, but thats just me being a fbf whore~

Can't wait to see the next one Jazza,

Keep up the good work.

Jazza responds:

Yeah I do use Tweens too much, but I need to compromise to be able to keep content coming and focus as much on other things. I'll try and offer more action sequences for you in the future though :)

Oh by the way, I love your work :)

[Waiting for Tom]

Oh you guys~

...you two need to make a full blown epic opra piece of this. Depicting the epic struggle to get Toms attention.

[Days Of Yore]

What a Dooooooouche~

I swear i've lost count on how many times i've watched this, and only now have i noticed the knights heart break and unbreak.

It's a shame you didn't advance, your stuff really stood out.

molkman responds:

Thanks man! I feel super honoured. <3